how can something so cute become so sad its not fair i want a happy ending for klutz what is this?!

That was really, really nice tho bit of a disspointing ending, except really its what I'd except.

nicee. I like it, it's so adorable! :D...does it have to be a one-shot?

Bittersweet? I'm not sure, but I enjoyed reading it. It's realistic.

Really loved this one-shot.

Realistic story with great characters that works because there isnt a happy ending.

It shows how difficult is to let it go of your pride and forget about the reaction of everyone why it isnt easy to happen in real. It may suck, but C'est la vie. xP

Great job! ]

I think this is my favorite one-shot by you. It was relatable, because everyone has experiences somewhat like this. I actually thought for a few minutes that they were going to end up together. :P But this was a great ending too. Bittersweet, with a touch of longing. Great job.

aw thats depressing (

great story. it's well written and feel kind of... realistic.

i just like it a lot of some reason. i can't really explain it.

i loved this

this really feels like a true one shot, or extreamly real, i really liked reading it, you make it GRAND. but i sort of feel as if there was no real end, that it just goes in a cirkle round and round with the same problems over and over. am i right? maby not a story, that would take the story apart, but maby anoter oneshot, or if you could tell me what really happend to them.

UGH. They need to stop being so stubborn. Both of them! Right now! Because I said so.

-Sally :3

I love the characters in this story! They're very well developed, considering the length. The ending was sad, of course, but I think it works well. It makes the story original and also adds a subtle message about what unrestrained pride can do in terms of hurting relationships. Great job!

Ooh, I really liked this. I could actually really relate to it, because I was in a similar (well, sort of) situation not too long ago. And it's always good when a reader can related to the story, becuase it means that it's realistic. Which this was. I'm glad that the main character considered his reputation as a player (I guess), and didn't let herself just get completely lost in him like you find in most romance stories here on FP where the leady guy is/was a player. You know. I also really like the relationship you developed between Klutz and Suave (it feels so weird to refer to characters like that as if those words were their actual names). You couldn't help but empathize with Klutz. At least, I couldn't.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this (if you couldn't tell). It's definitely going into my favorites. You're a fantastic writer. Keep it up! )

PS. This is random, but I like how Adam looked over at the protagonist with sympathy and held her hand. It said a lot.

Nya. I like it. (Leaves me wondering if- I mean how long it'll take for them to get together. Ah the joys of one-shots.

Thank you for it.

aw its so cute and sad..

i wanted a happy ending!