Reviews for relations
Lauren Wolfe chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
[Yo! Wazzup? ;D]

Pretty angsty, all right...however, I think that it would be better if you explained "why" the persona hates his/her relations...I mean, yes, you mentioned the grins, faces, etc., but WHY exactly?

Anywho, cool modifiers. . Rock on! :)