Reviews for Trials of a Virgin
K.E.May chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
ok, that was really good. you had an actual plot and storyline which most stories on this site are missing. it was refreshing. fabuloso! fantastico!
xxxx chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
wow that was amazing! i know u said it was the end of the story but i really hope u make another chapter!
Rosetiger13 chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
wow, this is really good, great even!
jaded image chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I think you did a brilliant job of writing this. Seriously. The details were mind-blowing, and so sweet. I loved Hunter and Kimi together, and how sensual they were. And the fact that he was a half-breed was an interesting twist and him being able to smell her "innocence". I loved this, and I can't wait to read more of your works!
atreyu love chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
so did she ever find out he was half demon?
onomotopoeia chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Cute, omg, Hunter sounds like wowness smothered in 1337 sauce.
FM Radio chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
HOLY FUCKING WOW! I don't know if I could ever write a scene like that. I have no idea how other people can do it, Your story/oneshot was just amazing. The only thing I didn't like was how you described how "skin smacked against skin". That just didn't go with the rest of the sex scene, that part seemed vulgar...that isn't the right just didn't fit.
amazed chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
That was utterly fantastic, you are truly gifted!
dramarama36 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
ur an amazing writer
dancrgrl16714 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
that was really good i wasnt sure at first but that was really good
RedRoses08 chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Great Story. I just love it. I hope you write more like it soon.
D.M. Ralte chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Hey! I can't believe you're SIXTEEN! you write awesomely! good pacing and everything, keep up the good work! :)
Lightning Storm chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Wow! That blew me away. You have such a talent for writting, especially being 16.

Keep writting. I hope to read more of your work later
a chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
You use cliche lines and wrong words.
FireInMyBones chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
This is very well written I like it alot keep up you writing you have great talent
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