Reviews for With Love
jordanwrites4 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
I love this. I love how it seems to begin and end in two completely moods. Very descriptive, I can see it almost perfectly in my head. (:
degrassi669 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
aw, this was awesome and depressing.


but really i like it .

it reminds me of bellas point of view in new moon

fairies and snapple chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
I like this! Rhyming's hard (I don't just mean thinking of words that rhyme, though that, too). But I mean to do it so that it doesn't come across too cheesy or anything. I think this works, because at first it has a sort of sing-songy feel, then by the end I just forgot that it was rhyming at all.
PandaPanda chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
this was so tragically beautiful. I love the overflowing emotions that carried through the entire poem. great job.
PessimisticOptimism chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Very nicely done. I like how you really stayed within the emotion of the entire poem. I could really relate to the feeling you brought out in this poem. The imagery is beautiful. Keep writing!