It's beautiful. And I must say, I saw your playlist - your taste in music is incredible. I'm definitely going to be looking up the songs from that list that I've never heard :)

Beautifully mesmerizing, I love every line.

This is a really great poem. I like the point of view, because how often do people think about the not-so-perfect people, you know? Two little comments- one, I think shadow-y would sound better as shadowed, and "The star's toy, taunting me" could be "The stars toy and taunt me". But seriously, really nice.