|Reviews for Do as You Please|
| Crymson Tears chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
osh** Was this about me, or our other self-destructive friend?
I've been cut free for...A few months.
| Le Cosmonaute chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Hm, shows a different side to the arguement. "If you think that it'll help/ that it'll end your suffering". Opens a new window. Nice job, short but meaningful, though in the last stanza, second line, there should be, I think, a comma at the end.
| that reality chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
You have a direct an dunusaul way of writing. Do R&R my pieces too. Thanks and keep it up.
| castelgard chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
kudos for the very poignant message. love the way you put words, and how direct your poem can be. plain, simple, and direct.
| IwasSmitten chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
I'm just wondering, but are you referring to cutting or a suicide attempt? If it's the latter, I like how you're implying that death doesn't necessarily mean an end to suffering and the overall attitude of indifference.