|Reviews for I can't be with You|
| Charlotte Makepeace chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Very nice poem. You did a good job in putting that feeling into words...
| i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
The poem seems half-finished... but that's probably because you left the story half-finished also. Why can't you be with this person? Why won't you let them near? What you've written so far is pretty good, but I can't connect to what you're trying to say.