Reviews for Letter
daughteroftherain chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
nice rhyming,

it's sad but it flows really well

beautiful description.
J.J. Trost chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Well it's nice, but your alliteration is a little idiosynchratic and, at least to me, unneeded. It also could use more descriptions and visuals: more modifiers and imagery. Despite that though, it's not that bad.
HenneyBuggyBand chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
aww. very pretty and sad. i like the opening line.