Reviews for Kiss the Stars
Silvren Raine chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
sounds really sad... as if one knows their dream cannot be fulfilled. its a really nice haiku.
AlbanianAtHeart chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Omg, I looked at your profile and was reading the words and I recognized them. That is one of my favorite songs, I listen to it all the time.

Nice haiku, I like the tone it has.
sarasoldaccount chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
aww its adorable ]

i love the metaphor...

~srz
Sweet Madeline chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Very adorable! I've used the metaphor of kissing the stars before, but I've never thought about the fact that they can't be hugged.. o.O Nice. I liked it. :)
Lisa98 chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
aw i loove it : ) it makes me smile

i love the idea of kissing the stars

yet it makes me sad that they cannot be hugged and makes me wonder why.
Blissfully Sarcastic chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Lovely.

Especially for your first one.

Most haikus I've read are, well, saying they were disastrous would be an understatement; let's just leave it at that.

But this...Very interesting, I must admit.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Intriguing haiku. Very thought-provoking indeed. Awesome! Write on!

~Anna~ _

PS - Thanks for reviewing my poem. _
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Sweet poem.

~Twilight Starr~
DiaRose chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Very cute! I love the imagery! Very nice.

Love,

~Dia
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
aww.. sweet and sad

lovely haiku :)
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
This was a really good first haiku, and it made me smile. )
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
:) That was absolutely adorable. I think you'll make a great haiku writer!
Masked Soul chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Okay so I'm going to make a wild shot at what this means um Yeah no one can ever really reach the stars and hug them but it shouldn't keep someone from trying to reach their goals even if it does seem like it's impossible to reach them am I close? lol it was a good poem I hope you write something new soon
TragicDreams chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Interesting. I like it. I want to kiss the stars! :) Good job Ray-Ray.
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
This was so adorable. I'm not sure what to say in this review but I loved it.
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