Reviews for A Shame
The Jynx of Kari chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
I like the wording of this. I like the 'the making your heart sqeeze with the events that you should care for' contrasting with the 'apathetic American fool's thoughts.' I like it. Amercians [SOME] suck for that. lol

instant bliss chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Excellent writing. That's such a common feeling though, isn't it? Scary.