|Reviews for Silvia|
| Svfanatic2007 chapter 3 . 8/9/2007
Well you finally updated! I've been waiting for weeks.
Again another good chapter. I do wish you would name this mystery girl. imagery you descibe is very vivid. Which is really good. So keep up the good work.
| Svfanatic2007 chapter 2 . 6/30/2007
Now its getting more interesting. Hurry and email me that 3rd chapter! Its
You are a talented writer so I was wondering could you be a beta for me as well? Just reply in an email or pm.
| Svfanatic2007 chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Now Im only going to give you my opions about the Plot,story etc. Because I suck at grammer. But from what Ive read so far you dont need help in that department.
So far I am actually really liking it. Really I am. Silvia is a funny character with a feisty personalitity to match! I cant wait to read the next chapter! I love to read adventure stories.
| Carrot Cake chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Cool start! The fortune-telling with the gems was inventive and interesting, and I like how you've already begun to build up a world with mixed influences and power struggles.
Silvia looks fun. Tomboys are always good! I liked her reaction to be being told she had to get a dress :D
So, a journey awaits...very cool!