|Reviews for it's her fingers around your lit cigarette|
| i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
ah. this is just pure emotion.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
"she’s got beauty/and scars without apology"
i don't have the beauty but i certainly have the scars.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
I feel like I can't grasp this, though that was probably the intent of the poem.
| Doxology chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
this is the first poem I've ever read that I actually had to re-read each line once more before moving on in order to absorb all that was being said. Wow. how do you do that?
Peace and Love
| Oneiros chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Very nice...I particularly like the multiple enjambed lines at the end. Lovely.