|Reviews for Shattered Glass and Broken Puzzle Pieces|
| Basara chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
yet they form something when those are built again...
| Definition chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Very nice choice of words and imagination. Amazing job.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
I know this comes as a shock, but I can relate. Wonderful metaphor (wonderful in a horrible way, of course). Great job.
| gold against the soul chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Charming snippet of existence. I particuarly like the way you start on 'Cause', as though this is a conclusion to a new resolution or realisation. Effective use of the haiku form, and good imagery.
- gold against the soul
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
I can relate a lot to this. Broken things are hard to be put back together, and usually aren't worth it. Great haiku.