Reviews for Thinking
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
So much emotion... I know, duh, but it's expressed so well. Nice work.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
This is another sad one. But it was still so wonderful. The last two lines were so true. Great job.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
I really like this piece. The imagery is really strong and I like the way this was written. My only suggestion is in the last two lines. You ended both with 'now' and I was thinking that maybe a different word in place of one of them would sound better, but that's just my opinion. Nice work! Keep it up!