Reviews for Fallen Down
Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Hm, I suppose you fall down with it. Unless you can find something to hold on to...

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a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
I would try to lift it back up, but I'm not strong enough... great haiku and metaphor.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Feel very scared. Great haiku. I love how there is so much meaning behind all the words you write. Great job.