Reviews for Sandcastles
Militant Poet chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
Very neat use of sandcastles and tides. Your haiku is phrased prettily, I enjoyed it quite a bit!
Chameleon81 chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Very nice. I like cliches sometimes too!
Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
nice metaphor, even if a bit depressing. universal and true. cheers.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Cute metaphor. Nice haiku.