Reviews for Butterflies
Lossefalmiel chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
This is quite lovely, I really like the the style, and the word choices. Good job!
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
This poem was lighthearted and beautiful, just like a butterfly. I enjoyed this very much. :)
Kazuki Mishima chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
I would also like to know about the apostrophe before "to." This poem conjures up good images for me. The imagery really hits its target.
Lady Isabella De Luca chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Very cute and dainty, like a butterfly! I added in my mind an "of" before time in "in which all time freezed", seems to add to flow. I love the first line. Look forward to more. :-)
R. Louise chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
The rhythm is beatiful, almost like a song.
Bitter Irony chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
A very interesting idea: makes me wonder what it would be like to be a butterfly. :-) As always, excellent imagery, and a very neat rhyme scheme. In the third line, you have a ' in front of the word "to." Was that intentional, and if so, why is it there?

Nice job, and keep up the good work!