Reviews for Oppertunity
Writing my page chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Haha. That's funny. Very good. I love the last line. It made me laugh.

tearing hands chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
I love "anxiety" and opportunity" so close to each other in the first line, it kind of almost rhymes. I like the part in the parenthesis, too. It seems almost like it could be a haiku or a tanka because it's so short. Beautiful poem.

In case you didn't notice, you misspelled the title- "Oppertunity" instead of "Opportunity". :)
BardofArcadia chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Ohh, Nice. Ilove poems that basicly tell you to seise the day, and this one fits the bill perfectly. Most people would tell you to make it longer, but the way you have it, it adds a certain effect/flavor that woudn't exist in a longer poem. Keep up the good work. I'm currently writing a story called "Chris and Maridia." Maby you could r&r...