Reviews for Screams through the night
Leaves of Labefaction chapter 2 . 12/8/2007
It's a good story, but one thing I wondered is, if her eyes, hair, and skin changed color how did Jonathon recognize her?
DarkAngel.0209 chapter 7 . 10/9/2007
This chapter is just SO CUTE! OMG! I lurved it! Keep up the good work!
bloomerbrigade chapter 7 . 10/7/2007
I have the biggest smile because I'm so happy you came back and wrote that chapter! D It's really cute seeing her reaction to "modern" things, I liked it. I think the troll could make an interesting side character - whether he is used as comedy relief, or somehow more deeply involved in the black plot than we as readers realize - however he will be used, I think he has potential to make the story more interesting. D

Question - Larue's a vampire? I like it [and the bat wings!], but HOW? What happened to him? More please!

D D And lastly, Amanda, aside from the story, I tip my hat to you for learning Japanese. I'm so happy you remembered this story and love it still, but I do commend you for studying a new language! That's impressive.
n. paige chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I would keep reading but I'm having a problem with the thou and thee thing... even a long time ago people didn't use those words that often... they used the word you too... I think this looks to be pretty good though, I plan to keep reading and I'll post another review when I've finished
bloomerbrigade chapter 6 . 8/15/2007
Aw, I was mentioned! D That was awesome! lol!

As for the new chapter - awesome! Loved it [as always!], actually although I did think it was going to be Alexander [yes you were right!], I was actually quite relieved to find out that I was wrong! The suspense of their reunion is a really big hook you have to keep people reading! This story is really good and obviously very well planned out, you are a very good writer. As you can imagine, I was happy to get an alert in my e-mail about this chapter, I couldn't wait to read it. I knew it would be good! D D Keep 'em coming!
bloomerbrigade chapter 5 . 8/15/2007
Oh my goodness! I perused for a good story though this site and this is the first good one that has REALLY caught my attention. I was thinking about it all day afterwards - I am very hooked to the storyline. The mood was captured perfectly, the era, the characters - it's fabulous! You really have something good going on here. Please don't forget this story, it's one of the RARE FEW that is REALLY GOOD posted on this websute. You are a very talented storyteller. Keep it up! I am very proud and happy for you for writing and thinking up such a wonderful story plot! I tip my hat to you! D D
SereneSorceress chapter 5 . 8/14/2007
SereneSorceress chapter 4 . 6/20/2007
So passionately sad! I love it! Just some advice though;

it's is spelled "again" not agane."
SereneSorceress chapter 3 . 6/18/2007
Aww...How sweet! But one question; Was Anna in sunlight for a minute or so?
Fallin.angele chapter 2 . 6/15/2007
Wow this is a really good story! I Can't wait for the next chapter
SereneSorceress chapter 2 . 6/14/2007
Another great chapter!
SereneSorceress chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
WOW, THIS ROCKS! Please update! I hope Ana has black hair. Most vampire females have black hair and it would cool because she'd be so mysterious!
Paige Evans chapter 1 . 6/13/2007's good :D. I really like the idea and I'm wondering where this is going. I would like to give you a bit of constructive criticism, if you don't mind. It's all right to have a lot happen in a chapter (just look at my stupid story lol) but don't make it rushed. Some bits of this chapter were a little overwhelming. Also, a bit more backstory or explanation would be nice. And lastly, the language is a little off. The language in this chapter is a little more suited to 1606, not 1706.

I hope I helped, and I am anxiously awaiting the second chapter :D.

Your friend,

Fallin.angele chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
o, excellent, that was awesome! I love vamps! :D