Reviews for Hate and I
CELESTIALVISIONARY chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Wow... (That's the good kind!) Definately keep writing. Constance
xxXBlueDemiseXxx chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
I know exactly how you feel...good job. I can feel the emotion from this poem.
SirScott chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
That poem had a dark humor to it.

SirScott
Definition chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
The second to last paragraph was so sickenly and yet extremely well written. And the ending paragraph...amazing and complete. Wonderful descriptions and word choice - awesome job overall!
11th Commandment chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
This is good
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
And here it is. I don't know if you took my suggestion or anything, but this is perfect. It's got the vivid descriptions, the beauty, and a clear feeling that took my breath away. And maybe I'm reading too much into it, but it seems almost like what I was talking about... So, um... Next line...

Anyways, I really love this. The thing is, I can relate to it, and I'm sure many others can. I love how it has beauty that's just mixed in with this emotion and how it's very clear and powerful. Plus, there's this whole thing about the self-loathing which pretty much sums me up, so I love that line too...

So... great job. I really don't know if I'm even connected to this, but I just know that this is really a great use of your talent because this is the sort of poem that will stick with me for years to come, and that's what's important.
Peter Harrison chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Ah good, the lines don't flow into each other in this one. A pleasant read on a sad subject, but you use a very wide variety of words, which makes your poem colourful. Good job!