Reviews for Two Yellow Roses
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Wonderful piece. I love the title. I guess it's because it's yellow instead of red roses.

Twilight Starr
Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Really good! Two things: in line 18, you mixed up the letters "r" and "o" in "thorugh", it shouls be "through", and in line 22 you mixed up the "e" and the "a" in "raech", it should be "reach". Very cute little poem, and you're a talented writer. Keep up the good work!
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Correction: "And I raech out" Reach, I presume? Also, you capitalized "Red" in the second line when it should be lower-cased.

Anyways, aside from that, this poem is very cute. I really like how there are all of the different color moments and how each one seems to be different and special. It gives it a touch of originality. There's a nice flow with a nice common theme, and overall it's just very cute and sweet. It's descriptive, pretty, and cute. Very nice job.