Reviews for Night Time
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
I only see night time, too. Not being able to sleep isn't any fun. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
This is really eerily cool. I like the style in which you wrote this with the lines a bit more broken than some of your other poems. Nice work!

Gemma
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
"Between sleep

And wake"

-There's a couple ways you can fix this line. You could use 'asleep' and 'awake' or just use 'wakefulness' instead of 'wake.'

I like the subtle grittiness in this poem. Great work again, Thomicas!