Reviews for Internally Yours
Estrellagrace chapter 1 . 3/9/2019
I don't know how many lessons you've taken, but $50 is not very expensive for an HOUR long. I take instument lessons at 45 min for $40. idk just thought that that was kinda off, but i like the story kinda
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Very mature writing and realistic story, with the harshness and uninterest from the teacher at the beginning. Love it.
Kaz chapter 65 . 2/26/2014
Very good story but 2 things: the uk use pounds not euros and no street in this country has any more than 300 houses. So 2576 or whatever wouldn't exist in any street in the uk
herondalechick123 chapter 65 . 1/3/2014
I fell in love with this story! In the beginning I was dreading their slow and boring relationship but soon things spiced up and I'm still amazed at how much has escalated. This story has a place in my heart 3
A Lovely Critic chapter 56 . 8/5/2013
So far with this story, I've noticed you're very repetitive. Also, you have lots of detail in unnecessary places... Sometimes less is more. I also don't think things could ever go smoothly. You have one day of goodness, then you just jump to the next month and another conflict occurs. Another thing I've noticed is that you use many words to often. For example, when you're referring to the "plan", its okay to use words like "it" sometimes. Overall, its okay. Cant wait to see what happens in the end. I must admit, with very few spelling errors and good connections between characters, you're better than most stories I've read.
melissa chapter 58 . 3/1/2012
OMFG holy sh*t why did you kill Alexandra?
Nelsonstudenthigh09 chapter 65 . 12/19/2011
Oh my gosh I was and am completely in love with this story it is so cute :) and wow I loved the plot and mishaps and everything so well done I don't want it to end haha :) love it :)
Descoral chapter 65 . 8/17/2011
A very emotional story - The only thing that completely weirded me out was in C29 when she said "I'll see you in the morning" ... the same thing her father says afterwords. Bleh.

I was so afraid this was going to have a tragic ending, especially since it was angst from the start. The happy ending I wanted, however, is exactly what happened. )
StephieT1973 chapter 65 . 7/17/2011
Well, I just got done with this and I did enjoy it. It was a bit slow-paced at times, and did have a few grammatical errors, but overall a well crafted story. I am disappointed that you abandoned the sequel though. I would love to see what happens!
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 65 . 7/17/2011
Amazing story! i enjoyed every bit of it. :D
curlyCharlie chapter 65 . 6/10/2011
i l-o-v-e this story its seriously a-m-a-z-i-n-g!11

carly x
curlyCharlie chapter 42 . 6/10/2011
i HATE micheael!111111 grr why cant he just leave them ALONE!]#

i alove this:)
curlyCharlie chapter 9 . 6/10/2011
oh my god! poor her:(
musictaco chapter 61 . 5/28/2011
Oh gosh! My name is Alex and now I have the creeps from reading this chapter. Still an epic read. :)
Someone chapter 24 . 2/24/2011
Hi,I think you write really well but I don't think you fully comprehend the situation that this girl finds herself in! The poor thing is getting raped by her own father! She wouldn't want anyone touching her in any way, she wouldn't tell anyone! She would be extremely reluctant, to the point of tears! William chase on the other hand... he would report the father straight away! SHE IS STILL GETTING ABUSED! Why would he wait? If he loves her so damn much he should be doing something! I'm sorry, you've written it very well but the characters and their emotions are extremely poor and lacking thus making this a terrible story!
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