I don't know how many lessons you've taken, but $50 is not very expensive for an HOUR long. I take instument lessons at 45 min for $40. idk just thought that that was kinda off, but i like the story kinda

Very mature writing and realistic story, with the harshness and uninterest from the teacher at the beginning. Love it.

Very good story but 2 things: the uk use pounds not euros and no street in this country has any more than 300 houses. So 2576 or whatever wouldn't exist in any street in the uk

I fell in love with this story! In the beginning I was dreading their slow and boring relationship but soon things spiced up and I'm still amazed at how much has escalated. This story has a place in my heart 3

So far with this story, I've noticed you're very repetitive. Also, you have lots of detail in unnecessary places... Sometimes less is more. I also don't think things could ever go smoothly. You have one day of goodness, then you just jump to the next month and another conflict occurs. Another thing I've noticed is that you use many words to often. For example, when you're referring to the "plan", its okay to use words like "it" sometimes. Overall, its okay. Cant wait to see what happens in the end. I must admit, with very few spelling errors and good connections between characters, you're better than most stories I've read.

OMFG holy sh*t why did you kill Alexandra?

Oh my gosh I was and am completely in love with this story it is so cute :) and wow I loved the plot and mishaps and everything so well done I don't want it to end haha :) love it :)

A very emotional story - The only thing that completely weirded me out was in C29 when she said "I'll see you in the morning" ... the same thing her father says afterwords. Bleh.

I was so afraid this was going to have a tragic ending, especially since it was angst from the start. The happy ending I wanted, however, is exactly what happened. )

Well, I just got done with this and I did enjoy it. It was a bit slow-paced at times, and did have a few grammatical errors, but overall a well crafted story. I am disappointed that you abandoned the sequel though. I would love to see what happens!

Amazing story! i enjoyed every bit of it. :D

i l-o-v-e this story its seriously a-m-a-z-i-n-g!11

carly x

i HATE micheael!111111 grr why cant he just leave them ALONE!]#

i alove this:)

oh my god! poor her:(

Oh gosh! My name is Alex and now I have the creeps from reading this chapter. Still an epic read. :)

Hi,I think you write really well but I don't think you fully comprehend the situation that this girl finds herself in! The poor thing is getting raped by her own father! She wouldn't want anyone touching her in any way, she wouldn't tell anyone! She would be extremely reluctant, to the point of tears! William chase on the other hand... he would report the father straight away! SHE IS STILL GETTING ABUSED! Why would he wait? If he loves her so damn much he should be doing something! I'm sorry, you've written it very well but the characters and their emotions are extremely poor and lacking thus making this a terrible story!