|Reviews for all is lost|
| Azrael Adamine Gaunt chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Oh my god. This was a great poem! (Again if you get past the slang) I don't mean to be annoying and bug you about this slang, but I really just want to help. ) Sorry if I am being a pest. As I said, a great idea with this poem, but the slang has to go. It takes me an extra few minutes to figure out what you are saying...