|Reviews for Mysterious Stranger|
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
this one i like much much more. the title totally ties into the tone of the poem. here, the short words show mystery, like "he" will always be there watching, but notice him and he will vanish, as if he is too afraid to be who he is. nice job.
| EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Wow. This is quite a character you've created here, and the poem leaves you wanting to know more about him. Enticing. Well done!