Reviews for The Pains of Jerusalem
average.snarker chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Wow. This is amazing, I truly find this an interesting topic, and I love the way this was written. You should be very proud of this poem, I have seen very few poems on this site that deserve praise, and yours is one of them. Keep up the good work!

Cynically Yours,

Leah chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
This is really wonderful
Thomicas chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Wow. This is very, very, very clever written. You have good reason for being proud of this poem.

When I started reading I really didn't like the way you have used the different types of letters, but as I kept reading it occured to me how brilliant it actually is. It is a very clever agent throughout this poem.

The message is clear, and expressed very well, and it is very emotional.