|Reviews for be my baby|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
| Definition chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Simple but excellent metaphors/comparisons. Nice!
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
I could tell you meant this, and it was something I could relate to, but it seemed a little simplistic. Keep writing, though!
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
So many people want this, hopefully you get it! Great poem.