Reviews for Learning to Fall
R-Reynard chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
this is very good, keep writing!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
I liked this a lot. The whole feeling. The only think I'd change is the line "A shorter or taller building" which I didn't think flowed well. Maybe "A short or tall building" would sound better. But that's just me, you don't need to change it. I like the repetition of "Don't look down". It was awesome. Keep it up!

As Always

Ashelin