Reviews for what it means to be happy
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
i like this alot. very well put. sometimes we have to put up a face to make ourselves...well immune to the hurt you might say?

Sorrow
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
I like this.. the formatting is great.. and I love the ending.. very bittersweet piece... wonderfully done
cygnus olor chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I love these lines:

theres no emptiness in nothing

while nothing is empty

I like your style, abstract and meaningful.

Keep writing _

* ner *
TylerB chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Have you ever heard the song "How to fight lonlieness" by Wilco.

That's what this poem reminds me of. And being compared to Jeff Tweedy is a major compliment. Believe Me
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
I love it. *faves*
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
wow, i liked this a lot. my favorite part was the ending. nice work!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
honestly one of the most depressing poems i have read by you

very selfless also

reminds me of a friend i have
The Postscript chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Nice! I can tell your writing style has changed a little bit recently. I like the use of periods in the beginning line to make the commands more definite. Great write. Keep writing, k.
castelgard chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
cool.. i like the little twist at the end..