Reviews for The Key to Nirvana
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Possibly the only point about your writing is could something else really draw your attention?

I am attracted to your work because of the narcissism,

but also find it tiresome. You wish to be a writer, but what qualities are you investing in your characterizations?

Accompanied by comic book animation, in the movies, and on stage it could take on different mediums, though on the page itself I can see you need to learn a few things about how to bring out more. The piece you wrote about New Orleans

definitely was on its way. Though even then you stop and go back through the usual drug martyr glamor shot. Don't be so

quick to kill off everybody in your stories.

And it does make sense to apprentice. Many other known and unknown artists have imitated their icons at one point or another.
noh-mask-of-oblivion chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Unless their path doesn't lead to Nirvana. You can't see that far down the road so you really don't know for sure until you reach the end of the line.