Awwwww

hahaha yeah thick head girl...the story was sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

Aha this is great thanks for sharing this! :D

Love this! Very cute and well-written. You had me smiling right through.

m confused by/wid ur note..I wud like to read The facfic, from which this story is based upon, which u had decided to rewrite into this story into another story however finally rewriting the story ,u wrote in the first place, into this story..freak,m officially crazy!
btw wat's d name of d fanfic...

Lol I love the ending line. That's cute.

Aw, that's really cute (and funny about her not realizing that they studied in the same class). Great story! :-)

It's good but I want it more! :D He already set his eyes for her, huh? It's like super sweet! But natalie is... well, natalie. She is so clueless, really, and it kinda gets on my nerves despite it is what makes the story going. I hope they end up together, not only as a friend but as a lover :D yayay!
the chemistry is... not much, and so the feeling I involve in reading it. I hope you can write again, a sequel or whatnot, and make it more fluffy or something :D yay!

Very cute and sweet story _ I really enjoyed it.

It's a good idea. I like your characters and your writing but it seemed to just cut off in the middle of the story.

~TLL~

Your author's note confused me to no end. This didn't seem familiar, though, so it's not important.

I loved the last conversation they had. Aliena really is oblivious. Oh, and I liked Natalie a lot too, because I know a (bunch of, unfortunately for me) Natalies.

'aww..so sweet and romantic..love it.! :))

:)

oh how i wish i could form a more coherent review than that; you know, one with actual words. haha.

oh my god. this is so sweet. i like how it sort of started nowhere and ended nowhere. not in a bad way though. so sweet. i like it!

cliche much? but, eh, still loved it...