Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SO SUPER SWEET! :) ~Sarah |
![]() ![]() Hello! I love your one-shot The end is so... cute? Well that's what I thought :P Well, now I'm off to see if you've written more fiction Bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so sweet and cute! :) i love it! |
![]() ![]() Cute ending. Sweet. Very well-written. From what I can gather, you wrote a fanfic? Wish I could read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this won't be updated, and I'm fine with it. It's a cute one shot/. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww... so cute.:D love this. enjoyed reading this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that's such a cute one shot! I love it. Natalie being a siren is hilarious and the line about Danny waiting for her toforget her umbrella is just adorable! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending seems to be incomplete, like you forgot to write the last part. The rest of it was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so freaking adorable! - Morine |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! That was just too adorable...so cute. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a bit hazy at parts, a bit too cheesy, and there was no funny stuff. Where's the funny? You really have to work on the funny. Otherwise, it's fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it, though I personally think that it ends a little . . . abruptly? But it's good :) |
![]() ![]() The author note made no sense at all. xD The story was SO cute. Aw : ) LoLz His dark gaze met hers, “Because when it rains, I get to walk with you,” he answered. She stared at him in confusion. He sighed. “Seriously, for someone who gets so high in tests, you sure lack common sense,” he muttered. My favorite part... |