Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The summary was what caught my attention and I'm so glad I clicked on this oneshot! It left me with a wonderful fuzzy feeling in my stomach. Wonderful job! :) |
![]() ![]() Sweet oneshot, but it seems like it could have been fleshed out a bit more. I still enjoyed it, though. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, really cute. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I loved this. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ] cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, perfect ending! So sweet! I would've liked to see what happened with the siren friend, since Daniel was "her man" |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute. i liked it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() aws :D should've made them kiss or something. but sweet nontheless :D ~Nai |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is kinda sweet! i wish it was a longer story. lol. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. that last line just blows me away so cute. so effin cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww. this is well written, and cheesy. i love cheese. you could make this a story, if you want. well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw...this is so sweet, i love that last sentence! if a guy said that to me, i'll probably melt in an instant! hahah, great job, i love this one shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i love this story the last line “Did you realize how long I waited for it to rain and for you to actually forget your umbrella gave me the chils...this story is amazing..but dont' have the main girl fall for danny so easily cause after all he is kind of a stranger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I found this on the C2 Hopeless Romantic Dreams. At some point, my story was added on there so I decided I'd check it out, since I've still got no idea what, exactly, a C2 is. Well, anyway, I was reviewing your ONE-SHOT. Man, that was pretty awesome. I really think that you should turn that into a story, like with chapters and the whole shebang. Well, thanks for the interesting stuff, I'm off to see if you;ve got anything else I'll enjoy (most likely yes, I'm hoping) XX. Mackenzie |