that was a cute one-shot! keep writing! i think it'll be cool if you continued this with natalie in it! but thats just my opinion! its good as it is

aw, that was cute. I just wish that more had happened between the two. and you could have done more with the sister and the cousiN but that would have made for a whole series so...yeah, just forget that. it was actually refreshing to have it where they didn't end up together...kind of. I'm a hopeless romantic so I was a little disappointed that there wasn't a little more but...OMGSH FORGET ALL OF THAT THIS WAS SO CUTE! I LOVE DANIEL!and of course I get to use my imagination with them now.

and Aleina was funny. in an oblivious sort of way...

very cute. loved it. faves.

aw...that was sweet

ha ha!Cute story.

I find it really cute. Seriously. :) I did wish it would be longer but that's how one-shots are.

i squealed out 'cute' even before i read the one shot. i knew it wouldn't disappoint me (: it's so cute. seriously. lovethat just makes you want more and more. keep it up!

xL

Cute! (: haha Natalie.. XD

*and your A/N didn't make sense to me, sorry. It must be my lack of brainpower. XD*

Yay to my staff for adding this to our c2! (:

heheh how cute, I would feel so happy if someone did that for me! What ever happened to chivalry!

Very cute. )

Real Cool Story. If you don't mind me saying, unfortunately, i think that the part where he said "Did you realize..." if the girl is a teensy weensy bit lacking on the common sense you could've made her remain ignorant for a while to prolong the story a bit.

All in all it's a very nice read.

Hehe..cute...I like stories with Daniels in them. :D

AW

haha that's cute. She's so oblivious, like me

very cute