Reviews for Wrong Number
chipolata chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
What a cute story! 3
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Haha! Cute story :D I love it :)
anythingbutthis chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
PLEASE WRITE MORE I REALLY LIKE ITTTTTTT!
entertwiningvines chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
cute story. i liked the character chad. made me smile :)
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Cute. Too bad all wrong numbers don't turn out this way :)

There are a couple grammar errors, but nothing too awful. I'm also not sure that last line needs to be there. Sure, it's sweet, but I think the story would have been just as effective without it.
AbbeyEileen chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
I really like the story. I think it's cute. But the last line? completely unnecessary. all it does is draw the reader out of the piece and really detracts from the ending. personally, i would have ended it with "pick me up at seven." but that's just me...
balloonfista chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Lol, I just loved it! especially when she went all bitch on him at the beginning!

Ri
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
OMG is this a true story? It feels so very real to me.. If it is, congratulations? HEHEHEHE. *jumps around*
futureauthor852 chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Ha! I loved the ending...very original. Or maybe not and I just haven't read enough fictionpress stories. Um - either way, good job! :D

Angela
certainlyuncertain chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Aw. That was simply...amazing!

Found a couple of grammar mistakes here and there, but nothin to worry about! (anyway, i'm too lazy to point out which part was it!) Oh dear, gonna be honest with you... last part blew me away! Maybe next time i'll actually-

nah... XD

But you know, I think you could expand this a bit more.

But it's your choice! I might plan to read some of your other works. Wrong number is just really good!
admit it.you luv me chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Aww.
Kyllex chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Aww! Haha, this was hilarious. And so so cute. I loved it! Great job. (:
xPink Blossomsx chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
haha nice :]
XxAmberRomancexX chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
"um hi," I mocked, "who the fuck is this?"

Hilarious. This could make a really interesting story if you decided to expand it *hint hint*. There's so much stuff you could throw in, like her broken car, Chad and Mariana, Jess and her problems, etc. If you want. :):):):):) Ansley doesn't seem like she'd be won over that easily, so it'd be funny to see how she softens.

Again, if you want. ;):);):)
ihrtbks chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
That was cute,especially the last line! Maybe next time a wrong number calls, I should...

GREAT JOB!
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