Reviews for To Afraid
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Adorable poem.

"To Afraid" should actually be "Too Afraid".

Twilight Starr
Arafax chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
This was good. I liked to the two different viewpoints. Nice job. haha...the guy's point of view is good...I should know...lol

Arafax
lymli chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
wow, love is complicated.. I don't know why they're scared of losing something they don't have, I guess, it's interesting the way you put their view points about the same feeling.
sweets555 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Sweet kristie! there was a few typos and such, but it was great anyway. everything you write is always great...*is jealous*
WholeHeart chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
You might double-check your spelling and grammar, but it is cute.
x-SimplySam-x chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
wow, that was deep...i really liked it though.

Please continue to write!
HenneyBuggyBand chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
cuute. but you dont need the life part, i think. the other parts stand very well on theri own, and thats what makes it powerful. good job.
Karma.Rose chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
what a thrillingly original format! i don't know if you got the idea from somewhere, but it's knew to me, and i think it's fantastic. love the poem, and like probably everyone, i can very much relate... i really liked this... good job. and well done on using a realistic male point of view.

keep writing!

stella