Wonderful.

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! PART X REALLY MADE ME TEAR! great job!

:)

Cute ;3

aww.. that was just so SWEET. it was unique in a way, and so well written.

Hi there! Your story has been added to the one-shot category of "A Drop of Romeo." Here's your review:

Ali Thinks: Brittle hearts gives you a warning before reading her story: beware of clichés. But since this is a community for beautifully written stories, many of them cliché oriented, this warning may actually be encouraging for you instead. “A Love Story” is about a two people—a gentle, slightly naïve girl and her attractive, protective(but not overly so) neighbor—who had known each other since pre-school. If that doesn’t scream cliché, I don’t know what does.

But that’s okay; we love clichés, especially ones written as superbly as this one.

This one-shot is split into thirteen segments as it goes through their time together from the moment they met in pre-school all the way until the female MC’s twenty-fifth birthday. All written in third person, tidbits of how both characters feel about their relationship with each other is slowly drawn out, epiphanies from each of them ending the respective sections. Their relationship kept growing from their childhood years all the way up into adulthood, and brittle hearts writes it so well with little anecdotes from their times together that it actually feels as though I was looking through a detailed scrapbook of their lives.

With the happy ending we all hope for and the intriguing journey takes us there, "A Love Story" is a treat that I will let myself enjoy time and time again.

man *wiping d tears of joy * i totally enjoyed it to d CORE ..its BEAUTIFUL in TRUE sense..u showed dem just not like any couple but THE COUPLE true love xoxox

amazing job ..I LOVE IT :)

I enjoyed this. Thanks so much for creating and sharing it. I loved how you described but didn't detail the steps in their relationship. The short pieces and the glossing over is more meaningful, makes it more a 'whole' and forever kind of love. Once again, I enjoyed it. Thanks. He's loved her forever, eh? LOL.

Fluffy, so fluffy. If this was a pillow, it would be the world's softest pillow.

not too cheesy! Just enough, really :)

pHEW FOR A SECOUND I THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING TO DIE.
BTW I LOVED IT

Didn't relize that caplock was on to lazy to fix it

i adored this. the way you didn't name the protagonists was clever, gave them more importance and made them seem more human. great job!

Oh wow. This oneshot is absolutely mindblowing. The way you narrated the story was absolutely beautiful. (:

Favourited!

Beautiful.

It's clean, well-structured and oh my, the sweetness just melts in my mind. Ants will surely infest this.

I want to say "I love you".

I love you.

For your story and you.

:)

Cliche, but oh.