Reviews for Sinking Hope
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I liked the rhyming, it wasn't forced and eased the flows of the lines. This is brilliant! Great peice!
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Sometimes hope just sinks. Excellent poem.

Twilight Starr
Ouvrez.La.Porte chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
I liked that! It can be taking as a serious poem or a funny poem actually, which I think is cool. That takes skill! Very good job!

-Shu Fang
Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Great poem, yet again, but in line four, there should be an "s" on the end of "shrinks", and in the 6th line up from the bottom, either pick "my" or "a", don't use both. Good job, keep it up!

Gemma
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
i think too much

this is a poem that is good.
Tetelestai chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Yay it rhymes!

I like the whole thinking and shrinking thing.

The last stanza is making me think, about why hope is gradually sinking.

Good job!