|Reviews for Nightfall|
| bioncafemme chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
| utterlyheartbroken chapter 4 . 6/29/2009
loved it nice chapter i can't wait for the rest
| Hell's first Icicle chapter 4 . 6/11/2009
yes! you wouldn't believe how ecstatic i am that you've updated this. i thought it had been abandoned forever, and was quite miserable about it. i can't help but be drawn to these characters, and i hope i get to see more of this soon. :D
| chibichoco chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
Haha cute chapter. I really do hope that you'll update this again soon. :)
| utterlyheartbroken chapter 3 . 4/27/2009
This story must've been the first femmeslash that i think is truly worth readin and i do hope u continue
| Three Score and Ten chapter 3 . 3/2/2008
M, Adrian. *_*
Usually, I am predisposed NOT to be attracted to vampires simply because of the cliche. You have very merrily shot that predisposition to hell by un-cliche-ifying her.
Love the narrating voice, love the descriptions and the feel, more soon please?
| chibichoco chapter 3 . 2/18/2008
Oh... dang... that was a great chapter! hehehe great fun in your story. I'll be waiting for your next update! XD
| Three Score and Ten chapter 2 . 2/13/2008
This is one of the best treatments of a usually-cliche situation that I've ever read. You make the first-person voice believeable and flow well, and somehow still manage to include vivid imagery, which is no easy feat. Thank you very much and I'll look forewards to more of it!
| Fei chapter 2 . 9/20/2007
Brilliant. I really like the way you write, and I loved the characters. I hope you continue with it, because it is really good - much better then most of the stuff on fp.
| X0ImaginaryGirl0X chapter 2 . 9/14/2007
Excellent, i love it lol.
p.s i wrote the anonymous comment on Nightfall at your livejournal
- Signed Me XD xp lol
| chibichoco chapter 2 . 8/8/2007
Wow. I really like your story here. It is very interesting and I think that you should continue it. I really like it. I hope that you will update this. Yeah XD
| Prowler chapter 2 . 6/25/2007
Great. Great. Great
thanx for teh great update.
And this should continue, it is amazing to read :)
| MichelleMagly chapter 2 . 6/21/2007
WOW! Please continue! I look forward to reading more chapters in this, and soon. The writing is amazing. It flows just about perfectly. There was no disruption in any spots, and the chapter ends always leave the reader sadly BEGGING for more. The characters are also written out well. They have a good balance of what a normal person would have in them, so they seem realistic enough. They're easy for the reader to get attached to. Well, there's my two bits. Keep going!
| Prowler chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
OMG! Awesome story! I love the way you portray the characters.
And the story has such a high potential. Please update soon I want to know what happens. )