Reviews for Numb and Awake
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Wow. Harsh, real incredible. I really like your poetry it grabs at sensitive points and pulls and yanks.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~
winteria chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Oh wow. I love this [I don’t need a million regrets

It just takes one not to forget

What a waste I’ve become]


Keep writing!
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
At least this poem showed signs that the narrator had hopes of finding happiness.

Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Loved it - i love your writing style and the emotions behind your writing. I also liked the way you repeated ' i dont need a million regrets'.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
i liked this one alot, very detailed and full of emotion . good job. . , your way better than me lol

continuous brevity chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
very beautiful. nice work on this.