Reviews for inside out
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Wow, this piece is incredibly evocative. There's so much raw emotion being harvested in this poem, and that's truly what poetry is all about, expressing the strongest emotions in the best way possible. You have some beautiful imagery and phrases in this, like "they all smell like you, like memory, like water" and "together we were light . . . alone I am shadow." That is just gorgeous. Really nice job here. Keep writing! :)
klare chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
this is amazing. i love the first stanza, it's brilliant. you write very clearly and with obvious meaning. great work. ]