*Swoon* I love this story! Great English!

awwwwww dat was cute i always like lip rings sigh i cant have one :/ i kind aa feel its sexy :P

Haha, wonderful :)

Cutest fluff ever.

Hey that was quite good :)

The protagonist's voice was believable if not the typical exaggerated "slow". But her attitude towards it wasn't annoying and in denial or whiny which is what I think what won me over. So, yeah. I've got no idea what colour his eyes are! hahaha... but they're very special. i get that. xD

Made me smile!:D

Its funny, my best friends name is Corey. I always thought it was a great name.

Its obvious that Love is your biggest inspiration..

I like that, because I believe that Love is more than a source of life, but the source of all creation.

craM...

funny thing is that i was listening to Oh it is love by hellogoodbye when i was reading this story. it's definitely not the greatest one shot but it was entertaining enough. the phone thing got a little annoying though

aw cute!

xx

awesome. i liked it. i like the whole open ending thing. good job

Wow...that was an awesome one-shot! great work. :)

Have to say, you're good. Really good. How I love people who end there stoies with this one line at the end which is funny and not "And he kissed me" or something like that. So kudos to you. Oh, and by the way, nice job at pulling off the cliche without making me disgusted. Wait, now I sound like a critcue. Maybe I shall be one, one day. Anyway, thanks. Just the last line alone made my day.

cute very, very cute. this was so good. pinkamoo sent me.

maybe I watched the notebook one-too-many times, the name Noah gives me an impression of.. Well, of THAT Noah. Not some guy with a lipring. But oh, screw it.

I love this Noah! This Noah is cute! This story is just so.. heartfelt! Is that even the right word to use? Gah. I don't know. I'm just all giggly and shit. Loved it, loved it, loved it!

I adore this story. It's sweet and short. Great job!