|Reviews for The White Mask|
| Giver of Roses chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
That was amazing! Did you mean for it to be in paragraph form though? Cause I know that I was trying to fix one of my poems and when I saved it it ended up all scrunched up like that... It was still absolutely amazing though!
I only ask because I noticed the capitalized words in the middle of sentences... and when I read it through a second time thinking that each word capitalized started a new line I saw it made much more sense (not that it was confusing, mind you)...
Very concise! It left a clear image in my mind! I just can't get over how wonderful it was! You did well! Will you be adding more onto this?
~~Giver of Roses~~