Reviews for Tarnishing Silver
Sora Hajime chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
this is so pretty! and sad... lots of great imagery! kudos!
BlueCrystal chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
I don't know. I didn't think this was bad... I didn't like the last line, I felt like it didn't fit the rest, like maybe you were trying for an ending, any ending, not the one that would fit. I think it might have had a better overall effect if you had left it simply, "Farewell." or even better yet, just taken away the last line. However, I did quite like the rest.