Reviews for serious immaturity
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
I like this.. its short and too the point.. very true.. nicely done
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
i've come to like this poem. it's short but to the point. and it describes a couple situation and people i know of perfectly. well done.
generically beautiful chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Oh man, I would LOVE to give this poem to a couple of idiotic friends of mine. However, a mean and nasty part of me would rather watch them fall on their faces. Good job summing up something so important in so few words.

hey maria chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
It feels a little choppy for some reason, but otherwise, I like it a lot. I love the connection drawn between stupidity and self-destruction; so many people don't realize that.