Reviews for My GoodBye
fallin4ualwayz chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
*sniffles, blows on tissue* that was beautiful! so sad
antigonelives chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
This is okay. It'd be better if you could feel/see/hear the emotion in it, but this feels so bare. You could spice this up by playing with the way you write and use language - and you could also experiment with form, topics, rhyme schemes, styles of poetry, etc.