Reviews for In the mirror
L. Sherman chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
To be honest with you, I don't like this one quite as much as your others. The words don't sound like they flow naturally, and the rhythm is sort of eclectic and broken up. It's also pretty repetetive, which isn't really a bad thing, but it detracts from the piece, for me, at least.

Beyond that, I like the idea behind this - it's good to see you can still speak from the perspective of a wounded soul. Kudos.

*Midget*
stfnia chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Did the shattered glass kill the woman? Or did she multipy by a thousand? Interesting piece...