Reviews for Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice haiku. I love the comparison of love to a blank canvas. Very deep. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha! lol! nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! So awesome. Great metaphor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() witty, very witty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent first haiku. Very broad and relatable. The end line works well to establish the elusiveness of the subject matter. Great haiku. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I couldn't even tell it was your first try! I loved your metaphor, too. I hope you find haiku writing as addictive as I did! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is better than any Haiku I've ever written for class:) ~Dakota |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great for such a hard form of poetry. You managed to covey all the meaning without leaving the reader feeling cheated. Is it really your first try? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! That's funny! I really don't know that much about haikus, but this is cute! Good job! -Shu Fang B.D'E |