Reviews for Love
Anthony C. M. Thomas chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Very nice haiku. I love the comparison of love to a blank canvas. Very deep.
Basara chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
haha! lol!

nice!
Emis chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
I loved it! So awesome. Great metaphor!
moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
witty, very witty
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Excellent first haiku. Very broad and relatable. The end line works well to establish the elusiveness of the subject matter. Great haiku.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
I couldn't even tell it was your first try! I loved your metaphor, too. I hope you find haiku writing as addictive as I did!
Through Glass Eyes chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
This is better than any Haiku I've ever written for class:)

~Dakota
Iris Early chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Absolutely beautiful. x
hey maria chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
LOL.
Perdix chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Great for such a hard form of poetry. You managed to covey all the meaning without leaving the reader feeling cheated. Is it really your first try?
Ouvrez.La.Porte chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Ha! That's funny! I really don't know that much about haikus, but this is cute! Good job!

-Shu Fang B.D'E