| Reviews for My First Kiss Thief |
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   RinHattori chapter 1 . 1/2/2009 Aww! Baby love. So sweet. |
| l0v3abl3 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 Cute. -l0v3abl3 |
| gulistala chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 Aw! BAHAHAHA! This is so typical kiddish behaviour! Cute! gulistanlik |
| Farnblorp chapter 1 . 2/21/2008 They're both toddlers. (O_o);; Haha, anyways... Well, I had something like that happen to me but I was around 7 or 8 years old. Very cute story with nice, descriptive language. You say you feel weird about that last paragraph but the whole thing would've really been one or two if spaced normally. Regardless, I thought it flowed well. Nice job! :) |
| Teffie chapter 1 . 11/3/2007 This is realy cute! Is there going to be more? I could see this developing into a full story. The writing style is simple, but I think it goes with the theme of childhood. The only thing that bothered me was the ages of the children. I think three is kind of young! Maybe you should make them seven or so? They'd still be young and innocent, but a little more...self-aware, I guess. I hope you decide to continue! |
| Larentia chapter 1 . 9/5/2007 That's so cute. I love it. Will it be a story or was this just a short story? |
| Miss. Dotty chapter 1 . 9/1/2007 LOL that is so...so... KAWAI... o_O LOL so CUTE write more stories! P x |
| idream chapter 1 . 7/30/2007 Aw, that's so cute! :D I hope you update soon! T.S.I.T. |
| Knightmage chapter 1 . 7/6/2007 kay, u romance freak |
| TheGreenPrincess chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 aren't i so fricken nice? i even added yur little story into moi favs. you better update! ;] |
| ihrtbks chapter 1 . 6/20/2007 Aw! "I want to show you what the prince did to the princess!"...I love that line. Childhood love is so CUTE! Sometimes pure fluff is more fun to read than drama. WOW! |
| Itsa Mia chapter 1 . 6/20/2007 AHAHAHAHAHA! I love little kids. that was unexpected. I expected that to be a prologue and then they grow up or something cluche. But this was great. CUTE!1 |