|Reviews for the illusion of translucence|
| hey maria chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
It's got gorgeous imagery and is written very well. I like how even though there's all these details to make it seem pleasant on the surface ("how happy," "childhood," "laugh and smile") there's also a gloominess to it, like the fleeting thought of freedom and longing and lost validity.
| Anonymous07 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
dude am loving this poem. its so mature. very well written.
| coldsunlight chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
i like "faithless fingers" & "sun-struck skin"... hmm.
| unshattered chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Great structure to this poem, very creative.